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#1 Mukora

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Posted 26 November 2008 - 01:44 AM

This is my first comic Entitled: Title Pending
it involves chickens,Link,and horrible punch lines.
This comic is so far due to the fact that I really couldn't find a place, aside fro Zelda Universe(whith a dead art section) to put this, so enjoy happy.gif


-Chapter 1 Intro-
1 Intro
2 I swear it's coke
3 Hi-Ho Bessy
4 With Ketchup
5 YAY
6 Flashback
7 Huntin fer profit
8 Godzilla farm
9 In the desert
10 Yo Dawg
11 George Lopez
-Chapter 2 Desert Tower-
13 Enter The Tower
14 Dark Copies
15 A quickie
16 GANON
17 Reunite
18 The Evil Ones
-Chapter 3 Ganon's Revival-
19 Revival
20 Cliffhanger
21 Agahnim's story
22 Family Tree
23 Dark Copies 2
24 The Most Amazing Fight EVER
25 THE EYES!!!
26 I believe I ca-WHOA!
-Chapter 4 Death Mountain-
27 Goro
28 Tower=Mine
29 The Mighty Dragon
30 Bootylicious
31 Tomatoes Pee Apples
32 They Don't Serve Burgers Y'know
33 My Spoon is too big.
34 Cock-a-doodle-doo
35 Family Ties
36 Girls Just Wanna Have Fun
37 CSI: Hyrule
38 Family Reunion
39 Sibling Rivalry
40 Shadows and Old Rocks
-War of Shadows-
41 Bacon Tacos
42 Getting Bigger
43 Death Soup
44 Not Appropriate For Children
45 A Demon Reborn
46 R.I.P. King of Hyrule

-Specials-
Icons
Thanksgiving 08: Thanksgiving Thanks
Behind the Scenes
A Cockers Christmas part 1
A Cockers Christmas Part 2
A Deserved Explanation

Edited by Mukora, 05 June 2009 - 04:08 PM.


#2 Mega Grumpig

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Posted 26 November 2008 - 02:04 AM

Okay, in my humble opinion the first few comics were actually really funny XD.gif
BUT once it got to chapter 2 I think I started to notice some kind of story and the attempt at coherence kinda killed the random quirkiness.

The various text sizes and colors can make a panel seem pretty confusing but aside from that I think you're doing a fair job so far.

#3 Mukora

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Posted 26 November 2008 - 02:11 AM

You know they said the exact opposite over a ZU, they liked the coherence...aw well it'll get better

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Posted 26 November 2008 - 02:33 AM

Ha HA! Welcome to my home turf! Good to see you here! happy.gif Sorry we don't have fan clubs here, but most of the craziness takes place in the Asylum instead.

One thing to understand about KG is that we love randomness.

I'll have to read through your new ones soon - I've been too busy to update or read much of anything, sadly.

From what SW (OBAMA) has stated, it may be that you're trying to converge your earlier randomness with coherence. It's difficult to mix the two after you start so strongly with one. Go with whatever you think will help your strip more - you're not going to please everybody with what you decide, but you'll ultimately be happier with the result.
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Posted 26 November 2008 - 08:11 PM

I concur with LM. Don't do what I did so many years ago and attempt to create cohesion out of the chaos; especially if reality is not your forte. After reading through the rest of the comics, the pages started seeming very familiar... and then I thought you were me from five years ago when chaos was so much fun. Plot/characters aside, this is a pretty decent sprite comic. It's a bit rough around the edges, but you have room to improve. I give my stamp of approval. If you haven't already done so, please check out the Sprite tutorials & Resources thread. Lots of good stuff there, and plenty of room to add your own wisdom.

That all said...

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This comic is so far due to the fact that I really couldn't find a place, aside fro Zelda Universe(whith a dead art section) to put this, so enjoy




Would you care to participate in the KG Box Beta project?

#6 Mukora

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Posted 27 November 2008 - 12:02 AM

I really don't understand what you're trying to do in that thread...so I'm gonna have to say that I really can't say...
And the whole thing about creating cohesion out of chaos, that happened on accident...I really just make it up as I go along sweatdrop.gif

Edited by Mukora, 27 November 2008 - 12:19 AM.


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Posted 27 November 2008 - 12:44 AM

Which? The resources thread?

Or the box link? That's not a thread, that's a website. :D

Edited by Cpt. Deep, 27 November 2008 - 12:45 AM.


#8 Mukora

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Posted 27 November 2008 - 01:32 AM

Thanksgiving Thanks


And Cpt Deep, I was reffering to the Box, it says that whatever contest that was going on is over...
Edit: never mind now I understand, and I would love to biggrin.gif

Edited by Mukora, 27 November 2008 - 01:46 AM.


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Posted 02 December 2008 - 05:07 PM

Tower=Mine



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Posted 02 December 2008 - 05:15 PM

"We built this city... we built this city on roooock and roooooooll!"
The second panel made that song pop out of no where, haha.

Notes:
- minor typo on the last panel, "whith" is spelt "with".
- I love how much detail you're putting into your sets
- Link sounds like LM's Blue XD.gif



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Posted 02 December 2008 - 07:34 PM

AH... major blast from the past to me... back to the good ol' days of Sprite Comics at TFH...

I'm not one for the criticism of comics, but it looks pretty good to me.

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Posted 07 December 2008 - 03:15 PM

The Mighty Dragon

Bad Mr. Cockers don't cuss,
Lava pool enlarging is due to the fact of me screwing up and not saving the background, thus having to remake it, hope it doesn't bother anyone

#13 Mukora

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Posted 08 December 2008 - 06:37 PM

Behind the scenes

1) apparently I live in a grey world...
2) yes I really do sleep at the foot of my bed

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Posted 08 December 2008 - 06:51 PM

*WARNING* Breach in the fourth wall! XD.gif

pretty funny stuff here, though I should point out that your sprite is a bit off in comparison to the others - it's as though everything that has something to do with your sprite disobeys the angle of the camera, haha.

Edit: Btw, have you had any difficulties logging into the box or using it?

Edited by Cpt. Clause, 08 December 2008 - 06:52 PM.


#15 Mukora

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Posted 09 December 2008 - 06:07 PM

Actually yes, whenever I try to upload a comic (via dragging it btw) it gives me an error message, is there anyway to upload it from a website ,like Imageshack, onto the box?




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